From the feedback I have received from teachers and peers, i think the following improvements may be necessary:
Colour Scheme:
-Needs to change.
-Too dark/overwhelming
Cover:
- Image of model could be bigger.
- Change size of masthead.
- Barcode needs more detail (issue, month, price).
Contents:
- More information needed.
- Need to use space better.
- Layout needs changing.
Double Page Spread:
- Check spelling errors.
- Longer article needed.
From this feedback I've been given a lot to think about. Firstly i am going to change the colour scheme as the black, white, blue made it hard for images and text to stand out and is too dark. Also i am going to make a change the layout of the contents page as the feedback shows that the layout doesn't work.
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