UPDATE - Contents Page

After feedback on my draft piece it was clear that i had to change the layout of my contents page. Above is an rough image of what the layout is going to look like. I think this is a vast improvement from my draft contents page. The main image will be of the model on the front infront of a different background from the cover. There will most likely be more text on the page so i have to take space under consideration when progressing with this layout. 

Feedback - Draft

From the feedback I have received from teachers and peers, i think the following improvements may be necessary: 

Colour Scheme:
-Needs to change.
-Too dark/overwhelming 

Cover:
- Image of model could be bigger.
- Change size of masthead.
- Barcode needs more detail (issue, month, price).

Contents:
- More information needed.
- Need to use space better.
- Layout needs changing.

Double Page Spread:
- Check spelling errors.
- Longer article needed.

From this feedback I've been given a lot to think about. Firstly i am going to change the colour scheme as the black, white, blue made it hard for images and text to stand out and is too dark. Also i am going to make a change the layout of the contents page as the feedback shows that the layout doesn't work.